You'll be new to my method of feedback (as RAB delivers his slightly differently,) but I tend to give a mixture of verbal feedback and my blog 'traffic light' system. The reason for this is to give you written comments with an indication of the level your blog is currently at - without directly telling you the grade (as we're not allowed to!) It also helps you to see where you are in comparison to the rest of the class - and hopefully spur some of you on. You can also use the blogs in green as style models to follow - just make sure you don't plagiarise.
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Caroline
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Some of your posts are detailed and
have demonstrated good use of media examples.
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- Ensure you're keeping on top
of work - there's quite a few tasks that aren't up there at present.
- Vary the output of your posts (try
Prezi, SlideShare, etc.)
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Taylor
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Excellent detail in
blog posts - very analytical as well. Good inclusion of images to accompany
comments. Well done!
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- Make sure you embed
links and videos in your blog posts (it's much more presentable, which is
something you're marked on.)
- The detail in your posts is superb, but there are still a few tasks you need to complete - be careful not to fall behind. |
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Jake
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Great detail in
the completed posts - good analysis of existing examples, Jake.
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- Ensure you're keeping on top
of work - there's quite a few tasks that aren't up there at present. I
realise yours are detailed and they may take time, but be careful not to fall
behind!
- Embed YouTube videos into your posts. |
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Mollie
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An excellent example of a blog
–detailed posts which are presented with care and demonstrates a range of
different media. Superb, Mollie!
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- Complete timeline of captions for trailers.
- Storyboard/timeline of camera shots/angles/movement and
editing/soundtrack. (Pace)
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Millie
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Dan
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Good analysis of the film
posters, Dan; the inclusion of Slideshare really helps to break up the blocks
of texts in the other posts.
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- Make sure you're including different media in your blog posts -
posts should be complimented with screen caps, videos, etc.
demonstrating the examples you're referencing.
- Quite a lot of tasks missing at this point - make sure you don't fall behind! |
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Adyn
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Scarlet
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Very detailed posts, covering a
lot of the research areas highlighted by VXF and RAB.
Good inclusion of different media, Scarlet!
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- Make sure you introduce your
posts to explain what the links are and why you've included them.
- Like Mollie, your next step is to complete the timeline tasks - see my blog for a guide of how to complete them. |
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